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The final two questions have been left blank in order for the author to ask specific questions about the concerns s/he is dealing with in the current draft.
1. The assignment states that the focus of your VoiceThread “should be the formal qualities of the work you are attempting to explain.” Has the author adequately retained this focus? Is there significant formal analysis of the artwork in question, or does the author focus too heavily on social, political, or cultural concerns? How might the author use formal analysis of the artwork to deepen his or her argument?
2. The assignment also asks you to contextualize the artwork “within a specific historical, artistic, or cultural context.” What is the context the author has chosen? Is the connection between the artwork’s formal qualities and this context made clear in the author’s thesis statement? What about within the body of the podcast? Suggest ways in which either of these aspects of the draft might be improved.
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1. The assignment states that the focus of your VoiceThread “should be the formal qualities of the work you are attempting to explain.” Has the author adequately retained this focus? Is there significant formal analysis of the artwork in question, or does the author focus too heavily on social, political, or cultural concerns? How might the author use formal analysis of the artwork to deepen his or her argument?
2. The assignment also asks you to contextualize the artwork “within a specific historical, artistic, or cultural context.” What is the context the author has chosen? Is the connection between the artwork’s formal qualities and this context made clear in the author’s thesis statement? What about within the body of the podcast? Suggest ways in which either of these aspects of the draft might be improved.
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